v.1
Sometimes I'll sit and think maybe
I actually am getting over Her, or
Even I wasn't really that into Her
Until whenever seeing Her picture
Randomly, pop up on social media
Then reminding Me like remedial
How deeply N Love I B with §he
And since it has been so long
Whenever I finally do see Her
It feels like falling, N Love
For the first time, again, then
Coming home to a lifelong marriage
All at once, so feel like a dunce
For missing our wedding carriage
v.2
Sometimes, I will sit there and think
I might just be getting over Her, or
Maybe even I wasn't really into Her
Like all those years were insanity
Until randomly seeing Her picture
Pop up on social media reminding
Me like remedial, just how deep
N love I B with §he, and since
It's been so long, whenever I
Finally do see Her, it feels
Like falling N Love again &
Coming home, to a lifelong
Marriage, all at once, so
Such a dunce for missing
Our wedding carriage as
I was too late to make
The date destined for
Our Love's true Fate
Verse 2, because of the formatting, feels more like a descent into madness which is just perfect for the subject tone.
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Thanks for the input! That’s one of my favorite ways to format my poetry, and I think your reasoning is a big reason why
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